I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Thursday, 27 November 2014
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Thursday, 13 November 2014
A paragraph about an old woman
“How long have you been standing there?” I wondered as I caught the eye of the crumpled old lady.
When I looked at the crumpled old lady she had cracked lips furling around gums where teeth once lived.
She had a rich indigo velvet, folded carefully to frame the face and Keen eyes, alight with mischievous youth.
Along with deep channels of time, etched into a wizened surface.
Thursday, 6 November 2014
Old Woman Description.
Old Woman description
As I watched the woman crouch down, I could see she was as ancient as the universe. As I caught the eye of the crumpled old lady, I saw deep channels of time, etched into her wizened surface. She had keen eyes, alight with mischievous youth. Her rich indigo velvet, was flowing carefully around the frame of her face. When I saw her eating, her cracked lips were furling around gums were teeth once stood.
As I watched the woman crouch down, I could see she was as ancient as the universe. As I caught the eye of the crumpled old lady, I saw deep channels of time, etched into her wizened surface. She had keen eyes, alight with mischievous youth. Her rich indigo velvet, was flowing carefully around the frame of her face. When I saw her eating, her cracked lips were furling around gums were teeth once stood.
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