Monday, 28 August 2017

Anual Speech Competition P.E.S

Have you ever said a speech in front of over 150 students? I haven’t but some of the students in Team 5 did last Friday. For some of them it was like an impossible mission that your mum has assigned you to like doing the whole washing in 1 hour, but for others it was like a  walk in the park. I am going to tell you what speech I found appealing and the speech I found entertaining.
3 students from each class from Class. The students names were put in a box and the teachers had to pull one out and whoevers name was pulled out goes first or next. Next please?

The speech that I found appealing the most was Danielle's. It is appealing to me because I can relate to it. It relates to me because it happened to me in tonga with my grandad but he’s with the lord and saviour now. Danielle’s speech was about why she thinks that drugs and that kind of medication is bad for you. Her speech was very deep so get yourself some tissues and prepare to cry. Her speech was about her Grandma and how she passed away by taking medication she also spoke about why you should tell your family members to not take too much medication because there is a big risk on your life. I also liked how she picked this topic and knew it was going to be hard to talk about.

The most entertaining speech to me was Mubashshir’s he was very very funny and I enjoyed every second of his speech. The speech was about what would he would do if he were President for a day. The first thing he would do was help the homeless that is a big reason why I liked his speech. He also wanted to try and stop pollution. I liked how he used actions and spoke clearly. He also wanted to provide more money to schools and to businesses that are struggling with money.

Well, it’s that time there’s always an end to a writing. It’s time for this writing to end, but before I go tell me in the comment section does Danielle’s speech relate to you? Or what would you do if you were president a day. Thank you for reading my writing. Bye


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  2. I like your writing and tour explanation it was so interesting to me. I also like how you explain that most entertaining speech you listens too.

  3. I like how you said something positive about this person

  4. Amazing work ajani I really like your writing.I like how u used full stops and capital letters.Great work Ajani

  5. Malo e lelei Ajani,
    I really liked how you related Danielle's speech to what happened to you. I found out that your writing was entertaining. Which speech did you think could relate to you the most?


  6. Kia Ora Ajani,
    I liked a part in your writing where you said it relates to you as the situation was similar. I enjoyed her speech as well! I'm with you where you said you also like Muba's speech it was entertaining and had good points. How would you feel if you got picked to speak?


  7. Hi Ajani,
    I liked to say that I found your writing really interesting to read for me and others as well. I liked the part where you said that you could relate to Danielle's speech. That is part of making a connection. You really have improved a lot on your writing, Ajani. I feel like I can relate a bit around Danielle's speech too. Sorry to hear about your, Grandfather. Here is my question for you, like you wrote at the end, What would you do if you became president for a whole day??