I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
You have shared some very strong ideas from the different viewpoints in this presentation, Ajani! Make sure you clearly state who 'they' are in your writing so your audience knows who you are referring to. Great work, Ajani!
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You have shared some very strong ideas from the different viewpoints in this presentation, Ajani! Make sure you clearly state who 'they' are in your writing so your audience knows who you are referring to. Great work, Ajani!
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