Tuesday 13 September 2016

My Fiction Story About Kayaking

One sunny, beautiful day the M.A.N.S team went for a kayak. If you don’t know what the M.A.N.S team is you must be living under a rock! It's Mitchell, Ajani, Noah and Simon. Mitchell and Noah are smart and Ajani and Simon are strong because they play rugby. They made up the name from the first letter in their names.

Anyway, one day they met up together at Countdown. Ajani said “Hey do you guys want to come for a kayak?” They said together “Yes Please!!” They were all really desperate because their parents did boring things, especially the television programs they watch. So they went to the basement in Ajani's house and were looking for some kayaks. Ajani screamed “DAD WHERE ARE THE KAYAKS!?” He said “There are some next to the bogey boards. I got them from this weird old man. Beware, there are secret things in these kayaks. There are only 4 kids who can control the secret weapons in this kayak. Only the brains of 2 mentally smart kids and for 2 physically strong kids.” The Dad said “It's crazy talk, don't listen to that.”

As they were looking at the kayaks and the M.A.N.S team were in shock they were huge. It was like there was 2 levels. After that they went for a kayak into the ocean, in about 2 minutes they were getting tired so they stopped and had a rest. As they were resting they went for a sleep. But by the time they woke up they found out that they were stuck in the deep. They were all scared. They all screamed “PLEASE SOMEONE SAVE US. S.O.S.”

So they all went in Simon’s Kayak and saw 4 hand marks. There was one letter on each of them, on two of them the letter was B and on the other two was S. So Mitchell and Noah put their hand on the hand marks on the B because they were the Brains of the crew and Ajani and Simon put there hands on the S’s because the were the Strong people in the crew. So as they put there hands on the hand marks. A secret passageway opened on the floor. Noah and Mitchell went to go check it out. Meanwhile Ajani and Simon saw a humongous Octopus came out of the ocean so they went down to the secret passage and tried to hide. They saw swords and axes so they picked up the swords and fought the octopus furiously. As they were fighting the octopus smacked Ajani in the face with his tentacle and Ajani got so angry that he threw his sword on the floor and his eyes went to the colour of yellow, his body turned silver, around his hands were fire. It was like he was a superhuman. Then he punched the octopus so hard the the octopus fell to the bottom of the ocean.

Then the Police saw them stranded and picked them up on a helicopter. So the Police took them home. When they got to Ajani’s house the dad asked them “What happened?” They said together “You don't want to know.” After that the dad asked them if they wanted a hot chocolate. They all said “Yes Please!!” By Ajani

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