Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Writing a narrative

On a rainy day Jack and Michelle went to hunt for food. There mum and dad died from a vicious attack from a tiger. As Jack and Michelle were hunting for food Jack spotted a pig. So he got his spear out and threw it into the pig's stomach. “Nice throw Jack.” Said Michelle Jack decided not to talk to her. Michelle started to get a little angry. “Jack why do you always shut me out when I say something to you.” Jack said nothing. Michelle then got very angry and decided to think of running away. Furthermore they roasted the pig in the fire and ate it.


When they were eating they heard a very loud roar from a tiger. So they ran into there house and hid. While they were hiding they they saw out there window that it was the same tiger that killed their mum and dad. Jack saw the tiger and he was furious he said to Michelle “Stay here i'm going to go deal with this.” Michelle replied “Don't it's going to kill you!” Jack knew it was going to kill him but he was to angry to realize it. So he started to sprint to the tiger but Michelle ran to him and held him back. She said “I’ve already lost mum and dad and i’m not going to lose you.” Then she held him back until the tiger passed. Jack said with anger “Why did you do that!” Michelle said “I saved your life!” So they argued. When they finished arguing Jack went in his room and slammed his door.





Michelle was proud when she held Jack back but when they were arguing she started to regret it. She thought maybe Jack wanted to die oh well I might as well say sorry so she went to his room and he could see that his window was open and Jack was gone. She started to panic. Then she decided to look for him. So she packed all of her weapons and went to find him. After 1 hour of trying to find him she found out where he went she said “He went to the tiger's cave.” So she ran all the way to the tiger's cave and screamed “Jack, Jack where are you” so she went to the tiger’s lair. She couldn't find Jack but she did find the tiger she screamed “HELP!!!” when she was screaming the tiger realized someone was there. So the tiger attempted to attack Michelle but Jack came and punched the tiger in the face after he did that his eyes turned yellow and started to fly.



As he was flying he realized that he could fire lava balls from his hand so he kept on firing lava balls to the tiger until the tiger died but when he died Jack and Michelle realized that the tiger wasn't alone. Then 2 more tigers came out and attacked Jack and he fell to the rocky ground and Michelle started to cry. As she was crying she said “You will pay.” So the power from his mum and dad helped her fight the tigers and all of the tiger’s died so she lifted Jack to their house and when Jack woke up he said “What happened.” Then Michelle said “I saved your life. Again.”

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